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Dreaming for Apple

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I love this photo , Its for Apple :rose: I wish have apple Iphone

The kid: Dear Barman , My Second brother`s Son

Photography : By me :D


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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

=absdostan showed me this photo, and I must say, I'm glad he did! :3
The photo itself has a nice, humorous approach. The baby's expression is very sweet and peaceful, and that really ties in with the picture quite well.
However, like every deviation, there are some thing I really don't like about it. For example, this could really use more color; the background looks drab, contradicting to a humorous kind of photoshop picture. Also, the quality is too dark, especially the photo showing up on the television screen. And... what's with the thing on the left hand corner of the TV cabinet? If I were you, I'd take it out.
Having said that, this would make an ideal advert for a PC magazine or popular subject. You really have a lot of potential! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="15" height="15" alt=":aww:" title="Aww"/>
((Please be gentle, this is my first time doing a critique <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="^^;" title="Sweating a little..."/>))